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From: "Toke Høiland-Jørgensen" <notifications@github.com>
To: tohojo/flent <flent@noreply.github.com>
Cc: Subscribed <subscribed@noreply.github.com>
Subject: Re: [Flent-users] [tohojo/flent] metadata: Add parsing of WiFi status information (#192)
Date: Tue, 26 Nov 2019 02:29:06 -0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <tohojo/flent/pull/192/review/322868381@github.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <tohojo/flent/pull/192@github.com>


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tohojo requested changes on this pull request.

Looking good! Only a few minor details to fix.

Also, please add some text to the commit message explaining the change; only needs to be a line or two for this (put that before the signed-off-by).

> +
+        for line in output.splitlines():
+
+            if len(line.strip()) >= 1:
+                parts = line.split() 
+                k,v = parts[0], parts[1]
+
+                if k  in unwanted_keys:
+                  continue
+
+                if k == 'txpower':
+                   v = float(parts[1])
+
+                if k == 'channel':
+                    # This condition will return a dict with all the values of the channel
+		            # Output will be {'addr':..., channel': {'band': 2462, 'center1': 2462, 'number': 11, 'width': 20}, 'ssid':...}

The indentation is off on the second comment line. Also, please add an example of the input (i.e., the line you're trying to parse) along with the output.

> +                if k  in unwanted_keys:
+                  continue
+
+                if k == 'txpower':
+                   v = float(parts[1])
+
+                if k == 'channel':
+                    # This condition will return a dict with all the values of the channel
+		            # Output will be {'addr':..., channel': {'band': 2462, 'center1': 2462, 'number': 11, 'width': 20}, 'ssid':...}
+                    v = {}
+                    v['number'] =int(parts[1])
+                    v['band'] = int(parts[2].strip("("));
+                    v['width'] = int(parts[5])
+                    v['center1'] = int(parts[8])
+
+                if k == "multicast TXQ":

Please add a short comment explaining this (could just be, e.g., "No interesting output after this")

> +                if k == 'txpower':
+                   v = float(parts[1])
+
+                if k == 'channel':
+                    # This condition will return a dict with all the values of the channel
+		            # Output will be {'addr':..., channel': {'band': 2462, 'center1': 2462, 'number': 11, 'width': 20}, 'ssid':...}
+                    v = {}
+                    v['number'] =int(parts[1])
+                    v['band'] = int(parts[2].strip("("));
+                    v['width'] = int(parts[5])
+                    v['center1'] = int(parts[8])
+
+                if k == "multicast TXQ":
+                    break
+
+            wifi_data[k] = v

This should be inside the if statement.

Alternatively, you could save one level of indentation by reversing the if statement above and turning it into a "continue". I.e., replace

```
if len(line.strip()) >= 1:
   # lots of code here
```
with
```
if not line.strip():
  continue
# code here (unindented)
```

Up to you which you prefer :)

> @@ -138,6 +138,7 @@ def record_metadata(results, extended, hostnames):
     if extended:
         m['IP_ADDRS'] = get_ip_addrs()
         m['GATEWAYS'] = get_gateways()
+        m['WIFI_DATA'] =get_wifi_data()

Missing space after =

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Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
     [not found] <tohojo/flent/pull/192@github.com>
2019-11-26 10:29 ` Toke Høiland-Jørgensen [this message]
2019-12-02 12:19 ` Toke Høiland-Jørgensen
2019-12-02 12:29 ` Toke Høiland-Jørgensen
2019-12-02 12:29 ` Toke Høiland-Jørgensen
2019-12-02 12:35 ` Toke Høiland-Jørgensen

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